[So here is an
alternative way that I might tell you about second person narration,
using a
form of second person narration to do it.]
What’s going on here? You begin to read a new story, and right
away
things seem a little unusual. It isn’t just characters with names
inside
the story that the narrator is talking about. He’s actually
addressing
someone he keeps referring to as you.
And at first you can’t quite figure out who it is. You ask
yourself, is
he allowed to do that? And you’re not sure whether you like it,
but he
keeps doing it. Does he really think you know how to pilot an
airplane? Does he really think you could have drunk that much
last
night? Does he want you to be in his story?
Or is it someone else
he’s addressing? Is there another character in the story he
hasn’t
bothered to flesh out? Where is that character lurking? And
what is
the reason for the conflict between the narrator and this amorphous you.
Or is the narrator
coming apart somehow? Are you eavesdropping on something that’s
going on
inside this guy when he begins a sentence with: “The
trouble with you is that you never do anything the easy way.”
But after a while,
you’re beginning to sort of enjoy the process. It’s fresh, sure,
a little
off-putting because things aren’t as certain and easy to fathom as
they’d be if
the author stuck to the old comfortable rules of third person
narration, but
it’s kind of enjoyable. You see the creative potential of the
confusion.
Somehow you enjoy the trust and familiarity, even though you sometimes
resist
when you begin to feel manipulated. And you’re thinking, that
narrator
had better be careful with this new form. It might get out of
control.
Until it does, you
decide to hang on and keep reading, partly because you’re thinking, you
want to
be a writer too, and you like the idea of trying out the second person
narration for yourself.
*
* *
So now that you’ve
read this piece, you decide to give it a try. You begin to write
something
using second person narrative techniques. And immediately you
discover
that it might actually be opening new vistas you hadn’t really focused
upon
before. You realize that when you address a reader as you,
it requires you actually to think about who is going to be
reading what you’re writing, every moment that you write. Right
away
you’re forced to consider the reader of what you’re writing, not as an
abstract
possibility, but as a reality that is sharing with you the processes of
your
thought as you think them. Right there beside you, right there
inside
your mind, there is the reader. Your text is coming out of your
pages,
rising up and floating over to what you perceive as your reader and
into your
reader, even as you write it. And the thought of that energizes
you,
makes it so you can hardly wait to write the next word. Now you
know that
writing doesn’t have to be the lonely solitary experience you might
have
thought it to be, back before you tried narrating in the second
person.
And you can’t escape thinking about the notion that maybe, just maybe,
this
technique might actually help you to get your point across even more
effectively.
You also realize you
can actually juice up the narrative experience by energizing your own
reaction
to it -- when you slide other elements into it, when you establish a
familiarity with a you that you
involve in the process. That you
might be another character you’ve neglected to develop up until
now. It
might be another aspect of yourself, deep inside yourself, opening a
dialogue
you might have dismissed as a form of madness, had you not been given
permission to explore it. Such possibilities!
And as you cook along
with your second person narration, you come to recognize the headiness
of
blurring the lines between writer and reader, between writer and
character,
between narrator and protagonist-participant, yea even between narrator
and
narrator. And you wonder to yourself why you never thought to try it
before.